LONG , LONG ago far,far away from here in Aisa lived two Tigers named Amber and Bella ( sisters).
"But you knew that all tigers have stripes? Right? Of course they do! But not these tigers! One day Amber and Bella where playing with Micar the Monkey (their friend) . And they really wanted some stripes like Zebra has. So off went the monkey to look for some stripes .She looked in the damp and rain forest' "not here!" she mumbed . so she went again to the dry and dasty desert; "Not here!" she sighed. Next she went to the village .She couldn't find any there. Then she had an idea! So she found some black paint and took it back to the two tigers and smered it all over them! And that is how the tigers got their stripes!
The End by Sabine
That's great Sabine! Now we know why a tiger has stripes!. I can see you worked pretty hard to get all the words spelled correctly - this is important because people reading this blog want to be able to understand your message.
ReplyDeleteYour story is easy to read, it makes sense and I like how the tiger admired the zebra and that's why she wanted stripes. Well done.
hi sabine love your writing i love how you went LONG LONG so cool from nico daly
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ReplyDeleteI really like your story. It is very nice.
Laura
Awesome Sabine! I really like your use of repetition to make your story feel more "legendy". Great adjectives and dialogue too--thanks! Miss g.
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ReplyDeleteWOW- INTERESTING STORY
I LOVE HOW TIGERS GOT STRIPES (I LOVE TIGERS!!!)
FROM YOUR FRIEND EMILY:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!