Friday, 23 May 2014

Levi's story: The Sun Bear's Shining Chest


The Sun Bear’s Shining Chest

Intro I would like to take you to a place with brave bears and scared bears a strange place called the zoo

Sun bear habitat all sun bears always have a yellow chest, right? Well you are wrong! one bear (called bear) had no yellow chest. He told the other bears that a tiger ripped his yellow chest away. Sadly he lied. He was born with out a yellow chest. Other bears called him names like dark bear grizzly bear etc.

The top dog called Sunny he was the strongest the toughest and had all the laaaadies. Bear was scared, depressed and his parents didn't stay with him a lot. When he tried starting a conversation with his parents they always answered  back “ sorry I have to go to the potty”. It was a lonely life.

The bears had no idea that a zoo-ologist had found a chemical that had a solution  for Bear’s chest.

Now back to the habitat it was just a normal day, Bear just woke up to a fuzzy vision to find a orange animal when his his weird vision disappeared he realised it was a TIGER!!!
(Bear’s mind) what I’m I gonna do aahhhhhhhhhh!!!
(Back to the real world)

The tiger was heading to Sunny’s rock. Bear started sprinting and then all his might he punched the tiger back to his habitat. Then Bear’s chest turned yellow and every bear shouted you’re a HERO.(What really happened) the zoo-ologist put a chemical in Bear’s dinner the day before and that is how the bear got his chest

6 comments:

  1. Nice work Levi! I like all the different punctuation you have used.
    Would that chemical work on humans?

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  2. Really funny and creative Levi :) I like that there is a legend-type reason and a science-y reason for the sun bear getting his yellow chest. Thanks! Miss g

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  3. tigers eat sausages !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. We like how the sun bear got a yellow chest
    *nice vocab
    *cool and creative story
    W:Use more speech marks
    FROM SABINE AND EMILY:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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